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Black Rogue

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New story
« on: June 18, 2011, 03:28:55 AM »
Hi,
NMM wrote such great stories. I tried to as well. Here is the first result.
« Last Edit: June 23, 2011, 01:00:50 AM by Black Rogue »

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Re: New story
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2011, 09:21:03 AM »
Nicely done. :)

I was just thinking last night that I'd like to see more stories posted to this section, so keep them coming!

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Re: New story
« Reply #2 on: June 27, 2011, 10:55:58 AM »
Hey, awesome, I like it!
Nice flashback setup, great flow and a good setup for future installments! (Also .pdf a good idea for reducing file size, might have to try that next time :p)

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Re: New story
« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2011, 02:57:45 PM »
Your modifications to Catt are awesome!
Your story was so fun to read!
Looking forward to more! =)

 

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