First of all, while working on the POV stuff do not forget to add POV for _her_ too!
Second thing, is it just me or it is currently not possible for both characters to perform the touching, massaging, caressing ("sex variety pack" stuff) on eachother AT THE SAME TIME?
Is it just one move at once?
I mean she touches her clit, he goes for her breast/nipple touching/licking, at the same time, That kind of things.